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Twilight Zone |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Twilight Zone I walked a spirits twilight zone Unburdened by my fetish clay Beyond my sleeping skin and bone To search the night and find the day I heard the echoes of my voice Each day each link that tethered me My Don Quixote living choice This journey into fantasy A phantom seeking for his peace To leave his ten commandment stone A testament his living lease In place above his resting bones I loved as well as I could love And have no message of believe Within this earth and stars above My heart was always on my sleeve. In truth I cannot say farewell But thank all those that touched my dwell. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 Heart to heart writing Sey, thank you and welcome home dear man.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
dear dear Sy, ohhhhh how I missed reading you each morning... You've been sorely missed my friend, Good good Morning Thank you for this mornings read...sending lotsa hugs |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
welcome back sir.. my thoughts to you and your family.. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Ah, Sy, a most somber write... touched, as it were, by twilight but zone to zone you hit me home, and I am glad it is here you roam. Hugs and Sparkles... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A heart to heart thank you. LeeJ Missed you too, good morning sweet. Cpat, Missed you too my friend. Soleil Noir You brought a smile to my face. Thank you |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I loved as well as I could love And have no message of believe Within this earth and stars above My heart was always on my sleeve." Seymour, a touching write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA I'm glad it touched you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the place wouldn't be the same without you I've been here five years today, so I should know when things just aren't right |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this has its ache, but you still manage to sing just as easily deep into us. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sir, you do indeed love well and wear your heart upon your sleeve, My very deepest condolences Isabel and Sy. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I heard the echoes of my voice Each day each link that tethered me My Don Quixote living choice This journey into fantasy Yes, Cervantes. I see this in you. You are a very special person... miscellanea |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
 You and the family are in my prayers... Awesome write, as always. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I heard the echoes of my voice Each day each link that tethered me My Don Quixote living choice This journey into fantasy A phantom seeking for his peace To leave his ten commandment stone A testament his living lease In place above his resting bones I loved as well as I could love And have no message of believe Within this earth and stars above My heart was always on my sleeve. ======================================== Sy, Sy, precious Sy...how your tender humilty touches me.... I had to highlight those verses as couplets because each stand alone for their poetic grace. Ya know Id follow you anywhere...me thinks you could hang the moon in the Twilight Zone.   *ww*  We go where there is love when ever we are lonely ... going back, we find, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy On your sleeve tis written, "POET"! I have been holding you in my thoughts...so glad to see you back! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You are a sweetheart, hugs. muted THANK YOU SO MUCH. Sharon, You are one of a kind. Hugs miscellanea And you are a very special person. Alyssa, You are a dear, hugs. JM, I love what you do with my poetry. But that's only one of the reasons I love you. WWRS Martie Who could stay away from sweet Martie? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Another wonderful write from you, Seymour. I hope all is well in your life. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, Thank you dear and all is well. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Gentle, beautiful and humble -- I like the ending very much. Best to you and yours -- SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh*...something told me to visit the blue pages this evening...I am glad I listened.... so good to have you back...there was an emptiness without your words...your words are the best thing any of us could have asked for...Welcome Home...**hugs** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan Thank you so much. Hugs James, Thank you my friend. Startime55 Thank you and hugs back. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sy, I sure have missed reading you this past week (I've been all tied up with work). I'm taking a little break now to read just a few. This was so gentle. It so sweetly touches my afternoon with its grace. .....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana This will probably be my last answer for a while. The big blow will probably hit some time tomorrow. See you abter its over. |
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