A Lady of Light and Lady in White Duet

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Open Poetry #33

A Lady of Light and Lady in White Duet

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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0 posted 2004-08-25 12:02 PM

Duet to My Love

If my mood were blackest jet, I'd be
stealing your thunderous roar
just to feel coarse rumbling throughout
and you would feel this
lightning flash

if my mood were black.

If my mood were white, I'd be
warmest sunshine after storms
illuminating the day
so that you might find
your way

if my mood were white.

But I find this mood is gray, a solemn, ponderous gray,
holding partial particles of thought
that entwines night with day
as part of dusk melds with parts that dawn too early

and the division portends the divide

So I try to find a medium,
a certain somewhere in between
where shadows play
through dark and light;
hues blending sunset into sunrise

and tomorrow's colors are yet unseen.

So give me, love, my dearest love,
my daydream in its whole,
then take me on my way, our way,
to the edge of this, our great divide
where seams of seem may dream the when,
where shadows black and sunlight white
may once again collide.

SEA

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1 posted 2004-08-25 12:16 PM

wow! Stunning write!!!

Cpat Hair

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2 posted 2004-08-25 12:17 PM

nicely done.. two voices blend well..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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3 posted 2004-08-25 04:11 PM

Yes, most certainly do two voices blend
so well. Like this one Ladies.... a good
blending of colors and moods...

Martie

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4 posted 2004-08-25 04:17 PM

A beautiful duet, ladies!!

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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5 posted 2004-08-26 09:50 AM

Thank you all very much.
It is always a pleasure to
duet with a good friend.

Lady Of Light
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since 2003-10-23

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6 posted 2004-08-26 11:01 AM

I thank you all very much.
Lady; it was a pleasure to duet with you.

msflame
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since 2002-05-21

Posts 188

7 posted 2004-08-26 12:21 PM

soft and gentle, romantic duet. Enjoyed.

Lady Of Light
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since 2003-10-23

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8 posted 2004-08-30 02:36 PM

msflame I thank you. My thanks to everyone, and to Lady, again, my thanks.

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