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Another Mile
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Another Mile |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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And it was another mile And that kind of town Standing real quiet Arms to good balance In the sapphire beam of close Dreamy and unlatched Middling voices beneath a live oak Remember no sound But nature’s hayloft Down in Tuscany swoop Where moonlight came down Through the trees Leaping like firelight Two whispers close In a storytelling momentum Filled with prose Filled with graceful notes Beautifully composed A memorable river A memorable man A fortune in sight Against all odds Different-colored summer Snapping it's fingers To the tune of something rare And delicate |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
finger snap bubble wrap playful day full of laughter in a pocket fuzzy shoe warm ms Lee |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This left me with a warm feeling. Thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...one of my favorites...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ To use your own words, "Beautifully composed"!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautifully uplifting as a summer romance |
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