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AndrewDickinson
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0 posted 2004-08-26 06:33 AM


Infinity in its finitenss
To naught far
Sorrow's happiness ends
For that is Death's part
The Door closed
Sealed to never be reborn
Window is open to let Sun in
To the Nevermore


© Copyright 2004 AndrewDickinson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-26 07:07 AM


interesting   welcome to pip hope to read more


LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-08-26 07:25 AM


very well written, welcome to PIP


Soleil Noir
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3 posted 2004-08-26 08:58 AM


Andrew, Welcome to Passions!  
On several levels, I enjoyed your Infinity.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-08-26 09:06 AM


Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed your first post and am looking forward to more. Enjoy your time here in these pages of blue.
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Gaia
5 posted 2004-08-26 10:06 AM


welcome to the blue infinity
Martie
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6 posted 2004-08-26 11:43 AM


Enjoyed!  Welcome to Passions!
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7 posted 2004-08-26 12:16 PM


good write here

Welcome

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Lost in thought
8 posted 2004-08-26 05:42 PM


I like the idea of letting the sun in to the nevermore.
Welcome to the Blue Pages!!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

Suetang
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9 posted 2004-08-26 07:17 PM


Hi Andrew

I really enjoyed reading your first post and I would like to welcome you to PIP.  I hope you enjoy your time here.

Take care..............Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Susan
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10 posted 2004-08-26 08:31 PM


An intriguing write.  Welcome to the pages of blue -- 'tis a wonderful place.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Startime55
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11 posted 2004-08-26 08:38 PM


Very interesting...you wove a vision of fantasy that the mind recreates with each reading...

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