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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2004-09-02 12:00 PM

Take me down
to a moonlit river’s view
wade me in the depths
swirl me
in the heart of you

~*~

soak me in serenity
drench my soul
with love confide
bathe me in emotions
you’ve kept hidden inside

~*~

saturate my senses,
immerse me in touch
that is you
ripple me in dreams
then make them come true

~*~

~SEA~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-09-02 12:04 PM

Oh my how beautiful this is Susan!!
So good to be home and read you once again.
~Smiles & Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

2 posted 2004-09-02 12:18 PM

this is so pretty

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-09-02 12:22 PM

SEA~
This is delicately GORGEOUS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-02 12:26 PM

oh yes!

I love this!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-09-02 05:52 PM

Lovely...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-09-02 07:46 PM

Beautifully romantic- swirl me - yes, love it.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-09-02 08:27 PM

then make them come true

yes~~

M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-09-02 08:32 PM

Ripple away...

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

9 posted 2004-09-03 04:58 PM

What can one say of these words?... WOW!

Beautiful work..... E S West

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2004-09-03 09:51 PM

Susan,
I like that I can count on a delightful experience when I open your threads. And such enticing pictures to spur your delicate writing. You rock!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-09-04 03:55 PM

Susan, I loved this! It is so romantic.... so passionate!

....jo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2004-09-06 01:15 PM

Such gentle ripples you leave behind.

Enjoyed the swirl, very much.

Hugs, SEAgal~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2004-09-23 10:32 PM

One more time...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

14 posted 2004-12-01 04:11 AM

Oooh nice one...to me it felt like a river: slow and lazy to begin with and then gathering momemtum with the imperatives as though it were approaching a falls, flying over the falls and once at the bottom comes the calm after the stormy water, with the gently rippling last two lines.
But then, I am kinda loony.
*hug*, Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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