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| Open Poetry #33 |
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...swirl me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Take me down to a moonlit river’s view wade me in the depths swirl me in the heart of you ~*~ soak me in serenity drench my soul with love confide bathe me in emotions you’ve kept hidden inside ~*~ saturate my senses, immerse me in touch that is you ripple me in dreams then make them come true ~*~ ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my how beautiful this is Susan!! So good to be home and read you once again. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
this is so pretty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This is delicately GORGEOUS~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes! I love this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautifully romantic- swirl me - yes, love it.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
then make them come true yes~~ M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ripple away... |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
What can one say of these words?... WOW! Beautiful work..... E S West |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, I like that I can count on a delightful experience when I open your threads. And such enticing pictures to spur your delicate writing. You rock! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, I loved this! It is so romantic.... so passionate! ....jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such gentle ripples you leave behind. Enjoyed the swirl, very much. Hugs, SEAgal~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
One more time... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Oooh nice one...to me it felt like a river: slow and lazy to begin with and then gathering momemtum with the imperatives as though it were approaching a falls, flying over the falls and once at the bottom comes the calm after the stormy water, with the gently rippling last two lines. But then, I am kinda loony. *hug*, Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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