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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she was sunday school slippers high heals on beverly hills bare feet and sin skin music thigh touch walking songs wonder woman lasso and ms carter's body too on her invisible plane she said she didn't mind the men on the ground looking up to her wanting since she stayed too high next to god she said and it was all natural except the implants and the birthmark there where the wicker made a perfect waffle she said hers was too done on the edges and did I know my yawn was rude _____________ Dark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
laughing at the image of your words darn those fingers...one always not pressing hard enough  M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-30-2004 09:14 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seen one, seen 'em all? LOL... Thank you for the morning chuckle! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
LMAO  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Am I reading a bit of "Dark" Jade? lol Cool write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice yawn |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Much enjoyed with a smile! Good morning! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe you could find humor in most any situation... good one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always enjoy you |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"bare feet and sin skin music thigh touch walking songs" wonderful imagery, really drew me in, as your words always do  Enjoyed the read.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... I think the dark jade indeed... nicely written sir. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
But where are her boots! Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ha! and what comes to mind is Morrison: "sidewalk crouches at her feet, like a dog that begs for somethin' sweet" on her invisible plane she said she didn't mind the men on the ground seems to me she is the ONLY one on THAT plane . . . you remind me of Kerouac . . . |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
what great imagery |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
A great write...LA at it's best e s west |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Only you can make a smile like this... your images are so darn wonderful.... enjoyed this m'buddie! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 hugsss I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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