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PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2004-08-22 03:11 AM

Broken Hearts

When a heart is broken
It will take some time to heal
It will shield its self from intruders
It is unable to feel

Some may try to touch it
But the barrier keeps them from getting near
There is a glimmer in their eyes
Their intentions are not legit

It is possible that not all come with bad intent
But even they will have to wait
With hopes and prayers that the heart will feel
Before, for them it is too late

It's so hard for a
Broken heart to trust again
It has been hurt once
The second time it would not endure the pain

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2004-08-22 03:14 AM

Hi PazSqual. This is the first of your pieces I have seen. Welcome to PipTalk. I am sure you will love it here. Interesting poem you have here. It was well worth the time it took to read. Bravo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-08-22 03:24 AM

"It's so hard for a
Broken heart to trust again
It has been hurt once
The second time it would not endure the pain"

Good write and the ouch is felt ....but from my perspective, it is possible to trust again....just never the same person.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-08-22 12:50 PM

so true, and well said!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-08-23 09:56 AM

Welcome home, Paz...
it is good to see you writing again, and...

you are more wise than you know.

Lady Of Light
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 31

5 posted 2004-08-26 07:40 AM

Hearts do heal with time and the proper care. There is much wisdom to be found in these words. I enjoyed this, thank you.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2004-08-26 07:50 AM

yes like the others, so true

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-08-26 07:52 AM

Some may try to touch it
But the barrier keeps them from getting near
There is a glimmer in their eyes
Their intentions are not legit

I believe the barrier you speak of is much more difficult to break through, then the act of pain itself, which someone caused...the aftermath of unthinking decisions really really do embrace someone.

A very good write

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-08-29 09:07 PM

So happy to see you join us here again.

Each time you write, I see two sides of a coin, flipping in the air...

All points view vividly, even the ones you hide behind. Each of us takes our path, and our own time to heal...

I humbly apologize if I offer comment not requested, but a write that begs comment is truly heartfelt.
TD

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-08-31 12:17 PM

Nice writing...some wounds are deep and take a long time to heal...james

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