Open Poetry #33 |
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Last Wishes |
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Sunshine
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![]() Last Wishes To take such thought and healthy care and leave a wish though not on air, to write it down in black, and white, and leave it for our loved ones’ sight Last Wishes Do not now try to make your amends do that while living and joyfully tend to the thrills of your life and joys of your days relieve all strife from all your ways Last Wishes And family! Now it is up to you to do what this writer intended you do! Take the black and write of word heed it serious and be assured Last Wishes That the writer gave long, careful thought to all that is written, all that is wrought and made these wishes quite carefully to be followed, yes, cheerfully! Last Wishes Now please read right vigilantly of these wishes I give to thee remember me for who I was, and what words are left, give them pause ~ Last Wishes Keep all things simple, plain and fine a slender box, one made of pine invite my friends, and family too to send me off to a hill with view Last Wishes Keep the atmosphere cheerfully light don’t think you send me into the night and there is one thing I’d ask of you to keep my memory in your song so true Last Wishes Once that all is all said and done remember these last words of one bring a chime, or two, or more and leave them here, the wind to explore Last Wishes For in the evening when dusk is nigh and light breezes come from on high a chiming ring I would have heard as angels sing their lovely words These are, my last wishes ![]() ~*~ Repost, Revised, For a friend, and his family. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, this was so lovely. I could not help but feel some tears though...maybe because it was just so precious. love ya, SIL |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I don't know how you do it, poet But some of your poems stab me right through the emotional heart, this is one of them. Nonmortal wounds, with a suffering that is soooo... joyous.. I must be a masochist at heart, lol Please keep stabbing, I am enjoying the pain... -------ice/ford ><> Of course I like your lighter stuff also, that goes without saying.... ![]() Come read to me some poem, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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![]() because your friend is my friend too... with a ![]() |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm I like this Sunshine. A really great piece. Death is such a frightening thing...and how we say good-bye is almost as important as how we lived. Me...I am so frightened of death that I will go screaming and kicking into the beyond. (Wink!) You just may have to look really really hard to see it. LOL! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is such a peaceful song.... ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Dawn, were that all passings a good song...thank you, dear... EV2 - I think some of us reach an age, where we realize that the party really isn't here, but there. I use to feel like you...but change is good...and not to worry...you've a LONG way to go! serenity, may all who face such things, have a peaceful time... ![]() Ford, your comment reminds me of The Thorn Bird...and I could never have imagined a more beautiful remark from you. Thank you! I'll try to make sure you are never disappointed. ![]() Iliana, there are all kinds of tears, don't we know. Thank you. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There are words to describe solids of many faces. Tetrahedron and decahedron are two. I just don't know the word for the many faces of your writing, but each side glows. This is a beautiful tale. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You didn't issue a BJ hankie alert.... Thanx KJ...this is a beautiful repost. One which needs to remain at your doorstep, that they might pick it up and read it that day, early... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Karilea, I'm glad to see this lovely reposted. It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. miscellanea |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Now who has forgotten the tissue alert? ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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Keep the atmosphere cheerfully light don’t think you send me into the night and there is one thing I’d ask of you to keep my memory in your song so true A beautiful thought Kari.....to keep the memory in song... wonderful write. |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Dust to dust, ashes to ashes... It sure hurts to see someone close leave us... Hope you'll recover from the pain soon... ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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