Open Poetry #33 |
Mystical Beauty |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
A moment to reflect Life is surely, seeing a smile. I found courage one day As I sat and greeted you. You made me laugh, and took away my pain. You may not know it, but you are my quiet angel You may not see my dream, but I see your beauty I was touched by your honesty I could see in your eyes a depth of comfort Not often do you come by, but you were there And when hearts come to beat, dreams come true You are mystical, you are life, and very rare Within you I see the silence and tranquility That only the closed eyes of Buddha releases Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
see, this is what connection is all about. "Within you I see the silence and tranquility That only the closed eyes of Buddha releases" if you find this in yourself as well as someone else you are a blessed person! beautiful poem and you should share this with the one who inspired it. Really enjoyed this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is really nice....must really be someone special! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I found courage one day As I sat and greeted you. You made me laugh, and took away my pain ... pure poetry., loved the whole thing ~wolfy |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
beautiful poem daniel I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You may not know it, but you are my quiet angel You may not see my dream, but I see your beauty I was touched by your honesty I could see in your eyes a depth of comfort Daniel, do you realize just how beautiful this is. It is sooooo very good to read you again. |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
You have touched something mystical and gorgeous. Thanks for posting this. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words were very calming. I enjoyed them M |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ahh...A mystical beauty that touches the soul and breathes a vision of wonder...Wonderful writing... |
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