Open Poetry #33 |
Sad Songs (repost) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sad Songs I can no longer stop the pain lonely lullaby's sad refrain sung in words oh so true of how I long to be with you hold me not just in the night kept in secrets from the light of two hearts so tightly held a place of fire where they meld rhythmic notes soothe my heart agonizing moments of us apart still hold pain but how they sing bitter sweet joy that they bring this lonely space within my bed a longing emptiness to be fed close my eyes, hear thy beat listening lulls me back to sleep just some words cut out |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey "peaches", check in with me, k? your sad songs are so elegant it's almost hard not to ask for more. But not if they hurt--no, not if they hurt. love ya you! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
sometimes the silence holds the sweetest story ... amazing how we can get the same radio station from so far away! Add a few strobe lights of lightning, a little backbeat of rain and one could drift easily through this song! Sleep well Helen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautifully sad......jo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Must agree with the serene one....elegant. This a perfect way to start my morning, after a night spent in pretty much the same way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Must agree with the serene one....elegant. This a perfect way to start my morning, after a night spent in pretty much the same way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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