LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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2004-08-20
07:36 AM
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Dappled back halves...herbs and roots Stretch out in the bed of pretty soon Dawn’s leg crossed, one over the other While peeking inside sunset, to take a look
Even in poor light, significance stands still
Shadows slide down slopes of nearing home Boiling to nothingness, over rising wet stones Fire framed within earshot, bleeding like a cougars cry A fare walk of loss, careens the traveler’s eyes
Amber expressions, unbutton hues of life Revealing details, which speak quit physic Pinching off chords of awkwardness There was no recovering a love now cautious
Pointless to ponder how those years could have been Once a thing is damaged, you can never weigh-in Best not to grieve your heart on and on In truth, a heavy heart, is the devil’s poison
In the intervals of silence, now a different being At times, the world can be a lonesome beating Divinity counts the tally, then taking some back It’s up to us, not to listen to unpleasant soundtracks
And so...
Dappled back-halves along with herbs of goodwill Stretched out in a colorful divan of chenille Dawn’s legs uncross a roll of nature’s way Trees green and swaying, with one very prolific ballet
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2004-08-20
08:12 AM
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"Pointless to ponder how those years could have been"
"It’s up to us, not to listen to unpleasant soundtracks"
~ Yes, so very true!... But sometimes easier said than done.
A beautifully expressinve write.

Linda

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
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2004-08-20
09:00 AM
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after I quit working out they said I was a romantic saggy for a while
grin
kewl stuff ms LJ
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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
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2004-08-20
04:20 PM
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Your nature dancing to the waltz of heaven and earth. Beautiful poetry Lee J.
Enjoyed!!
JL 
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2004-08-21
12:10 PM
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Silky...James
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