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whip lash (for Biscuit) wink |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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whip lash through crossed eyes and a wicked laugh i view the wreck too ugly for the pavement, a freeway of runaway hits and too close angles, where the good die away too soon never seen, backroads never plowed because the curious seek a whitelinesuicide down the middle of, popularity where whip lash is better than art and style ©sdt'04 "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." --Mother Teresa |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your very intuitive, very wise, special lady  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I 2nd the comment above me, adding, not to mention, very perceptive...a very good strong write |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
enjoyed your perspective snow miscellanea |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bump! Oh heck yeah. Now here is a poem. This is truly a great one. It cries...it weeps...it screams...LOOK AT ME! Love this! Wonderful piece of writing here. **hugs** Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
someday, kevin, i'll tell you where this piece came from ... thanks so much to everyone that read and commented. snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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