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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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this piece is not advocating the use of guns. please try to see past that when reading.  "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
i know the point you were making,and it came out loud and clear,i loved every word. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
thank you for looking deeper than the surface. i appreciate your comment. "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Snow, when are you going to show your art in a gallery? This one belongs there, you know!  ....jo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I can look passed it and see what you were trying to say. You did a good job. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 awesome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very close to home for me |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
WOW
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Very interesting picture. Poem is great too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I found a gun in a storm drain and called the police and they recovered it...I wondered if it had been envolved in a crime...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yikes....this will certainly make one think some before considering the rush of lust... Well said Snow... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm...now here is an image and words that just rip at the reader. Well done Snow. This piece is my favorite so far...well it and the last one I just looked at...oh and the one before that...and the one before that. Ah heck I like all your stuff...who am I kidding? LOL! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
good job snow  ...I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to... |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
the comments on this piece mean a lot to me... thank you all very much!! k~ you're jaded, i think :-) "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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