Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-08-18
12:49 PM
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She is His she has given herself for the taking given him her lust her body her heart
But not her soul lest he should own her
this piece she holds shadowed distant safe
lest the bonds become such they cannot be broken but she is broken
a slave to his whim
s.a.t.
Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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Krishankins
Senior Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
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2004-08-18
12:57 PM
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There I find an inner strength. Nicely written.If you're not yourself, then there is no you.
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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
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2004-08-18
01:39 AM
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Very sad...but definitely understood. Good job, Susan. ....jo
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-08-18
02:40 AM
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I can relate
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2004-08-18
08:22 AM
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quite sad tho well written in its tone
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2004-08-18
08:23 AM
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quite sad in tone, but well expressed
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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posted
2004-08-18
08:27 AM
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A way too common a scenario! Moving write.
Linda
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2004-08-18
08:34 AM
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brings about a thought, of how so many including me in this situation has said...."He/She hurt me"?
Good write Susan, been there and learned...in a good way...
smiles and hugs
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Goodknight
Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
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posted
2004-08-18
08:39 AM
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so sad - I ached after reading this - well done - Paul
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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posted
2004-08-18
10:09 AM
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Thank you all dear friends. I appreciate your replies.
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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Ratleader
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
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2004-08-22
10:03 AM
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That is the key, you know -- the giving of soul finalizes it...and it is an exchange, not a one-way gift, unless one of them is too selfish ever to know true love.~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________
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Magnus
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
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2004-08-22
10:06 AM
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Well done Susan...the soul never is given unless the spirit is broken...only then. I doubt your own shall ever be broken. For the tools reign...
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muted
Member Elite
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
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2004-08-22
10:24 AM
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this hurts...aches... written sooo well.
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Mon Cherie
Senior Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers
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2004-08-22
10:55 AM
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We all know the feeling of how sometimes we can give all, yet there's a little part of us that we keep deep within. We can't share it, lest it is snatched away and we'll lose it forever.
Thanks for sharing this Susan. I enjoyed the read. _,,,^.^,,,_ Florence
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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posted
2004-08-22
06:13 PM
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It is a matter of trust, perhaps, the giving of one's soul. A feeling of complete confidence in someone. It is a rare and most precious gift when found, a person to whom you may gift all of yourself. And a great risk, for much is put in peril. It is a form of self protection then, to hold that last piece of self back. And sometimes of self preservation. This is what I try to convey. And yes, it is sad, this, that we fear --
Thanks for reading and for your kind comments. They are so greatly appreciated.
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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