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Unopened, The Beginning, (Part 8)
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Unopened, The Beginning, (Part 8) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A lover’s dawn...one that rises slowly with the mist. Bringing a flutter to lids that closed slowly as dreams carried the chariot across subtle dunes. The awakening stir, a slight moan which escapes naturally, calling softly to the smooth warmth of a man’s chest...Inside, the beat of a heart, ever strong against the currents and eddies of streams flowing across the cotton sheets. Where be the love of thine lips? Where be the velvet of skin? Where be the fires that burn ever hot....fires that lap the edge of dreams, waiting the boil to rise against the brew. Tomorrow came softly beneath the furrowed fields of love’s bed...carrying with it the rose. Lips thirst the quench of desire....and eyes linger long....consenting, hungering to taste the fruits upon the chilled platter as moisture’s dew escapes the finger’s trace. She knew...as her hands lightly traced the contours of his spine, bringing rise to the geese that fly the flesh...bringing a persistence to her trace. Tenderly I say to thee my love, that thee art mine own soul whence the waters rise the waiting moat. That thee shalt carry thy shield for me, and whence my arms do beckon thee, thee shalt charge upon thy steed...and together our ride shalt carry us into the roaring falls once more. And together they lay peacefully, as dawn’s breeze fluttered the curtain’s lace....and her smile beckoned once more. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The sensual allure of your words takes one into passionate fantasies...Magnificent...**hugs** my friend... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Karen, good to see our Star flitting about the skies of blue. Now, what do you have up your sleeve for us....?? |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
mmmm...hadn't thought of it...I love to come and take a break from my book but that might not be such a bad suggestion...Let's see what I can come up with...**hugs**my friend... |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Ah, Karen is writing...and Magnus is stirring embers.... what does await? I smile. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well done...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And together they lay peacefully, as dawn’s breeze fluttered the curtain’s lace....and her smile beckoned once more." Ah, yes! The "Beginning" of a deeper and more meaningful ~ and loving! ~ relationship! You certainly handle steaming scenarios with a delicate ~ yet convincing! ~ touch! A FAN  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow....someone, polizzze turn on the air condiditoner Barry, this was hot and steamy...you are most certainly in love, or way to many soap operas, or...? WEll, lets simply leave the dot dot dots...smiles This was an awesome write, seriously Barry, from the heart and mind of love. Tremendous write...wish you'd make a movie of this serious...it would be priceless, a love story never yet told. Have a good day |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved it, BJ! So soft and deeply romantic!  ....jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Dear Sir- You sing to me, sweet troubadour, thee with the silvered tongue and fair words -- what beauty you do weave with your tales of heart and lover's concern . . .  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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