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and the song remains the same...
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and the song remains the same... |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada 
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the song remains the same and she'll dance alone again tonight he'll never be there he never was she fooled herself believing that he really cared how could he? how could anyone? the music plays into the night carried softly by the wind lost in the embrace of the moment she thinks of him always of him the song skips a beat and in the music's silence the real world crashes in he doesn't love her why can't he just love her as she loves him? is it really so impossible? the record begins again maybe there's still a chance, she thinks she goes back to her moonlit waltz living in the fantasy always dancing around the truth and the song remains the same I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You carried the mood throughout very well. I could almost hear it playing in the background...as she lies on her bed, wondering, ever wondering. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sad, but good, poem. ......jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Barbara~ There is a haunting beauty to this piece~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
thank you all for your kind words...you're much too good to me  I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to... |
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