Open Poetry #33 |
A Meadow I Call Eternity |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Meadow I Call Eternity Somewhere in the magic of the black forest my sweetheart is far away from me, in the meadow where she found me, a meadow I call eternity. How was I to know that her lovers potion would only bless a man of total devotion. Now I search for her love but she doesn't want for me. I had my chance for love and romance, until my wayward heart broke us apart in a meadow I call eternity. JamesLee August08 2004 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done JM, I believe that is how it is, isn't it....and I would surmise that perhaps it will be an eternity before.... Whatcha think? Good write, enjoyed it. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whoa! Now, JamesLee, this is most curious and I am wondering if this is Susie. Really beginning to believe you met a real, living muse. ....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Magnus and iliana...indeed she is real and exciting, sensual and inviting. However when I write, I write of past, present and future...especially when I write of women I care for or have cared for or want to care for, I write of experiences I've had, experiences I want to have and experiences I will have...some based on truth and some fantasy...hope this makes some sense...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes James, your entire composition makes sense, and more so, enscribing a lesson well learned, sometimes like children, we have to allow our hearts to feel the pain in order to receive blessings |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ You are soooooooooo tenderly romantic~ May all your 'pasts-todays-and futures' continue to give us such insight to your heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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