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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Shadows drape in Cascading anonymity Cloaking heart fire’s flame Whispers drift Sighing the unspeakable In shades of heather gray Pearls glisten in precious shine Pressed close to breast for guard Less they fall amongst thieves Dagger is clutched In steadfast hand Readied in case of need All is consumed by The swirling mist Which shields desires most fragile Hidden in disguise of nothingness Lingering between dimensions Veiled in the echoes of what could’ve been. s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you james --  susanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, hang onto the Pearls....but here, please share a few more...much enjoyed.  .....jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very good, wish i could write like that, but maybe someda, still learning to just feel again thanks  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
jo and mgroves -- thank you both and hugs to you  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how'd I miss this? wow... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks p.s. -- hugs SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But Dixie, you didn't...  and because of you, I didn't either! Well done, Susan! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Much depth and thought within these words, penned immaculately, precisely...very well! Glad you didn't have to use the dagger...wheeew! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Sunshine and Barry -- your replies warm my heart. Susanbtw, Barry, the dagger is in its sheath  Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful - really enjoyed this.. jwesley |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are might and lace! ~ a very intriguing combination to the less fair sex! lol    Linda  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
jwesley -- thanks, I'm glad I could bring you some joy E.A. what a nice description, might and lace, thanks. Hmmmm, I could play with that idea, sounds fun. Hugs to you both SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
As always your writing impresses me deeply...words could not do justice for what you have captured here. Beautiful write Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Amy, I appreciate your kind reply- SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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