ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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2004-08-09
10:16 PM
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Fluid comes the notes applause compotes Sheer as the feeling drapes me near denotes Leaving reason at the doorstep of another time Trimming season in an echo flavored paradigm
Where you wander on a path made just for one Sending signals through night seas to rising sun Giving fame to him so beautiful within my heart Imperfection, misdirection so magnificent a spark
Hums the lucid laughter in reverberated swing Higher after, moving faster every night calls sing One with woodland and the lakeshore, snow upon his brow Chasing rainbows in his nightclothes whether then or now
Touching Venus with affection as the wind sighs Wishing once to find direction as the crow flies Prayers of safety every harbor, every lit lamp Leaves revealing traces stealing over curves damp
Unabated times elated sent to name you Fond and favored, spearmint flavored just a mere few Called to heaven in your honor met in soft blur All my heart sent to be said in but a whisper
Copyright Kkh 8/9/04
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Kathleen Harris
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Midnitesun
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
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2004-08-09
10:50 PM
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quote: Leaving reason at the doorstep of another time Trimming season in an echo flavored paradigm
this echos loudly for me
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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
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2004-08-09
11:05 PM
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"Giving fame to him so beautiful within my heart Imperfection, misdirection so magnificent a spark"
Ah, yes, I knew "him" too! Beautiful and a keeper for me. Many hugs, jo
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Greeneyes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
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2004-08-10
12:21 PM
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Unabated times elated sent to name you Fond and favored, spearmint flavored just a mere few Called to heaven in your honor met in soft blur All my heart sent to be said in but a whisper""
~*~
Stunning write! I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-08-10
03:32 AM
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2004-08-10
07:01 AM
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quote: Giving fame to him so beautiful within my heart Imperfection, misdirection so magnificent a spark
Impressive beauty! Love, Margherita
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2004-08-10
07:39 AM
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Leaving reason at the doorstep of another time Trimming season in an echo flavored paradigm
surely our purpose is to love as you have described here...this was truly beautiful!
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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2004-08-10
09:46 AM
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"Where you wander on a path made just for one Sending signals through night seas to rising sun Giving fame to him so beautiful within my heart Imperfection, misdirection so magnificent a spark"
These lines stick out for me this entire piece is fantastic though so it is very hard to chose, but this verse just drew me in.
Wonderful write!
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2004-08-10
09:57 AM
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"Touching Venus with affection as the wind sighs Wishing once to find direction as the crow flies"
~ Just a sampling of what I found to be exquisitely poetic!
Love & Light, EA
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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
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2004-08-10
06:52 PM
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beautiful
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Magnus
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
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2004-08-10
08:23 PM
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Now, what red blooded male would not just jump right in with both feet after reading this. Well done K.
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MGROVES
Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
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2004-08-12
04:59 AM
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yes, beautiful
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vandana
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
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2004-08-13
10:19 AM
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nice
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Marge Tindal
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2004-08-13
06:42 PM
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KathleenKathleen~ YOU are so very word-beautiful~
'Hums the lucid laughter'
I love the entirety of this piece ... but the line above is a poem in itself~ My gawd ... that is GORGEOUS !!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
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