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When I Whisper Your Name To The Night
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When I Whisper Your Name To The Night |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fluid comes the notes applause compotes Sheer as the feeling drapes me near denotes Leaving reason at the doorstep of another time Trimming season in an echo flavored paradigm Where you wander on a path made just for one Sending signals through night seas to rising sun Giving fame to him so beautiful within my heart Imperfection, misdirection so magnificent a spark Hums the lucid laughter in reverberated swing Higher after, moving faster every night calls sing One with woodland and the lakeshore, snow upon his brow Chasing rainbows in his nightclothes whether then or now Touching Venus with affection as the wind sighs Wishing once to find direction as the crow flies Prayers of safety every harbor, every lit lamp Leaves revealing traces stealing over curves damp Unabated times elated sent to name you Fond and favored, spearmint flavored just a mere few Called to heaven in your honor met in soft blur All my heart sent to be said in but a whisper Copyright Kkh 8/9/04 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: this echos loudly for me |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Giving fame to him so beautiful within my heart Imperfection, misdirection so magnificent a spark" Ah, yes, I knew "him" too! Beautiful and a keeper for me. Many hugs, jo |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Unabated times elated sent to name you Fond and favored, spearmint flavored just a mere few Called to heaven in your honor met in soft blur All my heart sent to be said in but a whisper"" ~*~ Stunning write! I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Impressive beauty! Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Leaving reason at the doorstep of another time Trimming season in an echo flavored paradigm surely our purpose is to love as you have described here...this was truly beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"Where you wander on a path made just for one Sending signals through night seas to rising sun Giving fame to him so beautiful within my heart Imperfection, misdirection so magnificent a spark" These lines stick out for me this entire piece is fantastic though so it is very hard to chose, but this verse just drew me in. Wonderful write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Touching Venus with affection as the wind sighs Wishing once to find direction as the crow flies" ~ Just a sampling of what I found to be exquisitely poetic! Love & Light, EA  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
beautiful  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now, what red blooded male would not just jump right in with both feet after reading this. Well done K. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes, beautiful |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KathleenKathleen~ YOU are so very word-beautiful~ 'Hums the lucid laughter' I love the entirety of this piece ... but the line above is a poem in itself~ My gawd ... that is GORGEOUS !!!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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