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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
She’s the purest note of nightingale, First gentle breath of dawn, The cooling whisper of night’s breeze, Sweet song of heaven’s spawn. She’s music of an angel’s harp, Aglaia from on high, The gloried blaze of comet’s path, Across a midnight sky. She is the ink upon the page, That tells of one true love, And takes one close in warm embrace, To soar night skies above. She is the sparkle of sun, Upon high mountain’s snow, A racing brook down mountain’s side, To verdant plains below. She is a spire of billowed cloud, That hides the summer sear, A petaled wildflower of the lea, With fragrant scent so dear. She is the gateway to the stars, The path to heaven’s portal, Whose kiss each night on weathered brow, Turns a simple man immortal. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She is the gateway to the stars, The path to heaven’s portal, Whose kiss each night on weathered brow, Turns a simple man immortal. Brought a tear and joy to my eyes, this did. The visuals are lovely, and oh so loving. "She's" one lucky lady who deserves and inspires the beauty of your musings. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Is she real?  what a wonderful write, for someone very special |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Tim, this was really lovely!  ....jo |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful thoughts for a beautiful person! ~ARH  "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a first gaze at daylight...what a generous way to say...good morning sunshine Lovely |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
nice love poem...I could have written this about my dog....LOL.... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautiful. And the ending, captured my heart -- sigh.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She's quite fortunate... |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely words you have shared with us this morning. BonBon  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so very lovely Tim...and I always look for the response ofShe ~smiling~ at the view M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim She, must be wonderful, as this poem certainly is!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful...it's no wonder I find inspiration through your words |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
A beautiful tribute to "She". The last stanza delivers a nice wrap up, and the last line is a perfect closing, one of the best I have seen. Well done, Tim. CG |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
NICE READ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you keep writing poetry as wonderful as this, you yourself will be immortal!  Love & Light EA  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
what a lucky lady she is... this is a sigh waiting to be captured! |
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