Open Poetry #33 |
Allusions |
eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Allusions Smile my only son and raise it, Tango with Daddy, add the compatibility of This. Don’t say, That I’m the one you want to lose. If Kiddo can make it, then why not I? Tarantino showed us the way. Crepuscule with Muriel, Days of 1999, in English 182, Whose windows gleam on the animal warmth of bricks Rouged by the fluvial light of six o’clock. An infant dying of a cough in the Elysian Fields Brings to mind a time of great sorrow, Silver and cold were all the rage then, but now, Melancholy to infest us all- Joy’s grape did not burst upon my palate, Sleep and Poetry is now, all I know, However so these lines be done, they are now Here. I am still standing but watching out for The black ice. The winter is so hard here, bone chilling wind, Blowing to the core and I had thought that by now There would be little To draw me here. Mornings, nothing But the wind’s cold blade at my face In a skeletal wasteland. Harmoniously confused, chaos, By nature we desire to know. Desire to find, desire. Passion. In the house you were born One of the rooms on this street Knows your name, with happiness Stretched across the hills- What to others a trifle appears Fills me full of smiles or tears. There’s a door outside I leave it Open, come inside my world. There’s one life in here that’s broken Be my little girl, cause I will hold you high- As far as my arms go, maybe you’d let me in- Maybe I’ll let it show. You can look into my eyes and now what wrong Don’t even ask, If you want me find me Ill be hiding under, Leaves of Grass. Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this was awesome, so much depth here .... well done! and so enjoyed... I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
extremely well done!!!! very much enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
layers and layers of depth. so very well done, I enjoyed it much. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Me too. I'm going back to read it again. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
eor I'm touched by the emotive energy in this! |
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