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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Sigh I sigh the passing of my age Each laugh and tear upon my page The passing of reality The hunt for our veracity I searched through all the metaphors The symbols and excelsior’s The warmth of human coexist Horizons and the magic mist I questioned till the question wore And would not stay my mind of store It turned to dust before my eyes And blows within the winds comply But weather I accept or not Is non-essential to the plot It is but minuscule the change Beyond my comprehends arrange And though it terminates with me It does begin again with thee. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
imprint of footsteps are never gone... they just fall beneath another's song while dust is dust that fills the ages still, they lend new grist to sages... ~*~ You are wiser and warmer than ever before... Good Sunday morning, Our Sy! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, a wonderful write, I often sigh as well, but then, others will come, may we all not be forgotten and the dust that be us, be watered with the thoughts of our children. Great to see you here my friend, take care and be well. Sincerely Rick |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deep Sunday morning ponderings here, dear Seymour. Yes .... with THEE! And isn't it so comforting to know? You are beautiful forever and ever ... the soul won't dance in the dust...it ALWAYS dances in the light. Loveya, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I questioned till the question wore And would not stay my mind of store It turned to dust before my eyes And blows within the winds comply' Should a thought of yours blow my way it would make me the happiest poetess of the day~  Sunday morning *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I searched through all the metaphors The symbols and excelsior’s The warmth of human coexist Horizons and the magic mist[/b] =========================== I do so love the "symbols and excelsior’s" of your poetry. Love the tender humility of this one Sybabes...and that closing couplet make me Sy-sigh.  *ww*   I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. ~Fluent~ John O'Donohue |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And you are brighter and sweeter than ever. Rick That is what one hopes for. Thank you for the read and reply. Margherita A drink of you in the morning makes everything right. Marge, It has and will. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, That deserves a seperate answer. Be happy for that is what makes me happy. WWRS :squeze: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, good morning, Sweet Sonneteer! Your meter was impeccable, your message understood, and you deserve many an honour for the wisdom of your age upon the page. EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Just wondering, do you ever get any days off? LOL |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
What a jewel to read this morning...it sings perfectly... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 What a beautiful comment. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ah, to read a poem of yours Awakens music of many souls. They echo notes Since Time's beginning. In that sharing, There is winning. And this is a winning poem you wrote, dear Seymour! ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana I thank you dear. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sir Sigh..(Sy)...even after the pillar has fallen, the dust will settle gently on the grounds...brushing from the earth your words which shall rest within us forever. Never fear kind sir...never fear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Nice reply, thank you. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I searched through all the metaphors The symbols and excelsior’s The warmth of human coexist Horizons and the magic mist I questioned till the question wore And would not stay my mind of store It turned to dust before my eyes And blows within the winds comply" You say it well Sy. A sadness to this that fits somehow. Enjoyed as always...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Thank you my friend. |
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