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Just Fruits |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148
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Her words crisscross over the abyss and I am held motionless. She speaks of heaven, like she's been there. I take her hand and feel the presence of angels. She says "I'm a sinner." Funny, that's what I like most about her. Honesty should be rewarded. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Honesty should be rewarded." It always is - we most times just don't know it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
She says "I'm a sinner." Funny, that's what I like most about her. smile. Funny, but yanno, it's what we find in common...  I love the way you think. |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
funny, ... no, I love you both... It's easy to persuade the words your way. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 yepyes, this IS well awesome LUCKY GIRL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
~K~ - I really loved this! ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty neat write |
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