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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-07 02:22 AM


The Souls Sweet Caress

Tonite as I sit
here with you
I feel the
connections
of our souls.
For wherever we
are, whoever
we are with,
as long as we
don't have it,
we will search
for the lover
of our soul.
Until we find them, our journey
will never come to an end.
For I tell you, there is
a blending of the souls.
Some will settle for less.
They will miss the souls
sweet caress.

JamesLee
August05
2004

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-08-07 03:40 AM


I believe you are right about this.  Nice writing, James.   ....jo
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-08-08 09:58 PM


A beautiful right...well written
TD

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-08-08 10:57 PM


Yes, yes, agreed -- one must be conscious of not settling, or of giving enough time to ensure it isn't settling

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-08-09 01:46 AM


indeed
choshi
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since 2004-01-01
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5 posted 2004-08-09 02:13 AM


Oh Yes!  James, such Truth, but the way you said it....Just beautiful!    ~P  
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2004-08-09 03:19 AM


Yes, James, nicely done!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

MGROVES
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7 posted 2004-08-10 06:55 AM


THIS IS  BEAUTIFUL  


Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2004-08-10 06:58 AM


Dear James, this is definitely my favorite of yours ... the blending of souls .... wonderful.

Love, Margherita

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-08-10 07:55 AM


James, you are so correct...there is some deep down yearning in the core of our being, that will not be settled until that union is complete....and to realize this, is indeed a giant step in the right direction...I refuse to settle to, as I know full well, me...my needs wants and desires...and it is to our benefit to find our soul mate who will not only compliment our lives, but our journey as well...in allowance of our identities.

Smiles and hugs...good one

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