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Tampering convictions
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Tampering convictions It’s on its way to me again Those feelings unrest, feelings of sin My mind is harboring thoughts of flight My heart isn’t ready for the fight ~ It’s on its way to me again ~*~ curious and curious still how my heart cries out to wander hills to find in strange come lonesome towns unfamiliar faces all around where clocks tick backward in a click emotions never seem to stick where one can ride their way at night into a sanctum near twilight where eyes of prey beg one to play and no one hears these inner ways of timed round sound that’s wearing down will this cry soon tamper ground convictions that have forced me round this straight and long, oh-so-narrow path that beg me peace, but here’s the math and P.S. to you who hears this plea Frances keeps me company split/divides/conquers, then hides waving bony fingers wide play the song that rounds your bend know that ache will never end little girl, you’re no real tease and no road will ever ease that cry I hear there in your soul little girl, you are growing old. Convictions tamper down this bile uneasy sits this mind gone wild and split/divides me guilty true, that it still plays thoughts of wayward you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. wanderLUST well done ma'am. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a room full of stangers with leather eyes and ebony fingers strumming hurdy gurdy songs as she dances a little girl in women's shoes kewl stuff ms deca |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Decaflame, This is so well written and expressed. I'm in awe of how quickly you brought me to this mood. I enjoyed this a lot. miscellanea |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Deca, Deca, Deca....what'm I gonna do with you! Well, I did wake up with Bonnie & Clyde music looping in my head -- again -- maybe I'll play it once for you and send you a mindgram of it, just to torment your daydreamin' self! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keeper! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"It’s on its way to me again Those feelings unrest, feelings of sin My mind is harboring thoughts of flight My heart isn’t ready for the fight ~ It’s on its way to me again" Perfect Deca...just perfect!  Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah yes, I feel this one. Excellent.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Susan, thank you for sharing that...doesn't work if you don't feel it... Hurry back, Enchanting one... So are you, Dixie...  I don't know, Rat...you think anything can really be done with me?  Misc'e...now that's one of the nicest things I've heard today. Thank you! Haven't heard hurdy gurdy in a long time, suppose we can go find one and dance away? Thanks, DS...always... Cpat...Bingo! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I read this yesterday but didnt have time to reply...just had to come back...ya had me from the title on.( very cool title) Deca, thy muse is in fine form. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicley written |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How I miss it, too... I've never been lonely alone. It's always when I'm with someone who isn't completely there that the ache of loneliness sets in. I want my knapsack back. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful poem, Decaflame, and my heart goes out to you.  .....jo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes -- many things can be done with you....I'm thinking of some right now..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*huge smiles* so, do you know how much I love this one? now you do! ah wanderlust.... a treasure to be found and sometimes we keep the treasure and other times, realize it's not so shiny after all and throw it away.... I LOVE THIS. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
GS, methinks me do...thank you! Rat...go ahead, spill... Thank you for reading, Jo... Packing knapsacks as we speak, serene one... Thank you, Vandana... JM...it's always fun to see your name everywhere! |
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