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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-08-07 12:00 PM

Uniqueness by its definition seams
Portending on the outskirts vision streams
Without mercy iridescent white recedes
Through my fingers each articulate but beads
At the wall my feelings round each stone defiant
And dead ahead too far to see the dawn reliant
The weather wanes in creeking yawn a sober single
For up is up and not is prone atone and mingle
Withdrawn the light in sleepy eyes a jewel case closed
Where mission bells a hymn pray tells the rare reposed
In rosary each memory slips through my fingers
To let be said where life has led and magic lingers
A gem is born the cusp of morn in twilight murmur
Enfolded here in dreams so shear a carat further
Along the veil of dusk made pale a moment waking
All but the heart will set apart still in the making
For in this time of yours and mine the stretch of timeless
Unique the shape itself to drape in spells cast crimeless

Copyright Kkh 8/6/04

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-08-07 07:07 PM

You ride your chariot of laughter well. and
write a symphony, that we all might sit back
and listen to a beautiful song.

Nice write Kiddo....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-08-07 08:30 PM

"In rosary each memory slips through my fingers"

~ Very visual and highly memorable passage!
My favourite of several!!!

EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-08-08 09:20 AM

The weather wanes in creeking yawn a sober single
For up is up and not is prone atone and mingle
Withdrawn the light in sleepy eyes a jewel case closed
Where mission bells a hymn pray tells the rare reposed

~*~

I hear diamonds...

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

4 posted 2004-08-08 09:41 AM

Beautiful
assaults me
both barrels
loaded
I'm the willing
victim
splayed out
for all to witness
reject
and mold
into
the perfect martyr

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-08-08 09:49 AM

ThisDiamond
A wonderful read, enjoyed very much.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-08-08 09:50 AM

A beutifully done patchwork quilt-style landscape of emotions and images.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-08-08 09:57 AM

Lovely -- I can sense the thoughts as each bead is fingered.

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

8 posted 2004-08-08 12:29 PM

beautiful written--though I admit to having no knowledge of rosary beads, but you have given me more knowledge in these words then I have had in my whole life.

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