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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-08-06 11:14 PM



You wear your hailo
and all sees your glow.
But I alone know
There's a diablo,
That's simply loco.

It hides down below
So the truth won't show.
It feeds off sorrow,
So hatred may grow!

Cover the yellow
just let it mellow
to beige and lay low
or go with the flow

who doesn't know
one day will know


Hmmmmm............ I ways just playing with words, lol! Look at all of the oh words a WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!


Juju

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-08-07 12:50 PM


neat write
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2004-08-07 03:47 AM


Enjoyed this Juju....good word play!
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
3 posted 2004-08-08 12:21 PM


Yeah, thanx. looking now, the second phrase is slightly off, but I wasn't serious, so I got off subject. thank you guys.

Juju

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