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vandana
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0 posted 2004-08-06 10:04 AM


Your face

My fingers read by braille your face
And sink in thoughts below the lace
And know in time that thorns will bare

My thoughts are on you
The roses you gave
Became faded
Now I know
Time was here in lost of memory

There is a force that leads me on
It stays with me and never gone
It plays the strings within my heart
Hyponotic is the songs impart

I know the heart has been broken
For a long time
While you were gone
Now Iam here in a lost of your memory
Within my heart
There is always your love
And always will be
.
.
.
Powers beynd our comprehend
I'm sure will see a justice end


© Copyright 2004 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-08-06 10:17 AM


Mmm, this is sadly winsome, like a breeze blowing through an empty room stirring the sheers.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-08-06 11:22 AM


very nice well done!
Nightshade
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3 posted 2004-08-06 02:53 PM


Nicely done you two!! Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-08-06 06:42 PM


It plays the strings within my heart
Hyponotic is the songs impart

I know the heart has been broken
For a long time

~*~

A wonderful collaboration!  Well done!
Vandana, I shall be with you soon to duet!

miscellanea
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5 posted 2004-08-06 06:50 PM


Vandana, Seymour,
  I really enjoyed your collaboration, and am looking forward to another.  Well done.
           miscellanea

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-08-07 02:49 AM


Enjoyed...enjoyed...James
iliana
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7 posted 2004-08-07 03:35 AM


Enjoyed.  
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2004-08-31 10:09 AM


How on earth did I miss this!  Wonderful write you two!
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2004-08-31 10:11 AM


*s

nicely done
M

littlewing
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10 posted 2004-08-31 03:04 PM


Good Lord you two, you know
this reminds me of love lost
and found again,
unattainable - yet always remaining.
Did that make sense?

beautifullly heartbreaking . . .

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