Open Poetry #33 |
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A Duet W/Seymour Tabin |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Your face My fingers read by braille your face And sink in thoughts below the lace And know in time that thorns will bare My thoughts are on you The roses you gave Became faded Now I know Time was here in lost of memory There is a force that leads me on It stays with me and never gone It plays the strings within my heart Hyponotic is the songs impart I know the heart has been broken For a long time While you were gone Now Iam here in a lost of your memory Within my heart There is always your love And always will be . . . Powers beynd our comprehend I'm sure will see a justice end |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmm, this is sadly winsome, like a breeze blowing through an empty room stirring the sheers. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nicely done you two!! Enjoyed. Chris ![]() "At one glance |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It plays the strings within my heart Hyponotic is the songs impart I know the heart has been broken For a long time ~*~ A wonderful collaboration! Well done! Vandana, I shall be with you soon to duet! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Vandana, Seymour, I really enjoyed your collaboration, and am looking forward to another. Well done. miscellanea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...enjoyed...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed. ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
How on earth did I miss this! Wonderful write you two! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s nicely done M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord you two, you know this reminds me of love lost and found again, unattainable - yet always remaining. Did that make sense? beautifullly heartbreaking . . . |
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