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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-08-31 07:21 AM


Servile

I’ve reached the specter of servile
That lies beyond a mental pill
Where alter ego grows in flow
Fed by the wind that does not know.

Entrapped in the human flower
Grasping for its sense of power
Hurling towards my pace of goal
Chasing manna for my soul

Like water washing beds of stones
Or flesh that covers up our bones
Rings with passing of the moon
And hides the shadows of high noon

Wondering in the caverns core
While painting walls of metaphor
We meet the reaper and his sweep
And leave our dust for change in keep

It is the process not the store
That makes the path of evermore



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-31 07:26 AM


AMEN!!!!

hey Sy, good good morning to ya
Exceptional write this morning, thank you

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-08-31 07:30 AM


LeeJ
Good morning sweet, what are you doing up so early?

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-08-31 07:35 AM


Process, process, process.
Reminds me of some old comp sayings...
if you put garbage in,
you get garbage back...

so keep to the straight and narrow,
keep it clean,
and you end up with a surprised mom.




Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-08-31 07:39 AM


Sunshine
Have I told you I love you lately?

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-08-31 07:40 AM


Every day that you get to write a poem!
After all, they ARE all for me, aren't they?

Don't I share well?  

LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-08-31 07:42 AM


Oh Darn Sunshine, and here all this time I thought they were for me...DARN!

Smiles and hugs...I'm always up this early
just didn't take me as long to write this morning

Hugs and smiles to both of you...have a great day

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-08-31 07:43 AM


Sunshine
LOL who told ya?

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-08-31 07:45 AM


LeeJ
They are, they are. LOL

Martie
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9 posted 2004-08-31 08:21 AM


Sy

"It is the process not the store
That makes the path of evermore"

Indeed!!  



Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-08-31 08:22 AM


Martie
That is the deed to indeed.

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2004-08-31 08:23 AM


so it is not the the infection
it is the handshake
after the sneeze?

kewl stuff master sy

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-08-31 08:27 AM


Dark,
Oh my now everyone knows. LOL

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-08-31 12:42 PM


what a write! as always
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-08-31 03:05 PM


passing,
Thank you sweet.

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