Open Poetry #33 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
hail larry or some other 5am jesus, not jesus but jesus the IHOP jockey pushing java and greasy fixes for arteries that are getting soft security guards change shifts like socks on each other's feet at the theatre without windows and walls, nearly nude for the first time again taxi man has yellow jello under his t shirt pillow and ashes on his jeans from a cigar in the non smoking chevroulette until the brakes get done he will just slow down for pickups and drunks and the rhino girls that pay with tips in the rear view mirror and want to go to heaven if he knows the way there or has anything left they can get for trade and the light changes to red sky morning ______________ Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
security guards change shifts like socks on each other's feet at the theatre without windows and walls, nearly nude for the first time again taxi man has yellow jello under his t shirt pillow and ashes on his jeans from a cigar in the non smoking chevroulette ~*~ conform, non-conform, break the rules, or bend them slightly, you always paint images... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, Now that was an ordinary day. How about an exceptional one? LOL Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You see into an inch, and make a mile! ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nobody trips up the green lights like you do DS~ I'm thinking you've got em rigged! ![]() |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
The eyes you see with, the world you write - always a fascinating journey for me. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are able to turn an already telling moment into a matter of factual principle Enjoyed! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
red sky morning as the light changes life continues what slices can you bring us next? |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
and love the ending |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and the light changes to red sky morning Absolutely love this DS. ![]() Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"pushing java and greasy fixes for arteries that are getting soft" LOL, now THERE is a red sky warning. Enjoyed this, glad I'm not living so close to that scenery these days. I like my red skies at night. ![]() |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you write like no other always a pleasure ![]() ![]() I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
morning renews thru Dark eye reviews |
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