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Disco Lights |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Maneuvering through darkness and sound, Are bodies of black, brown, yellow and white Battling the heat of sexual tension While meshing into a kaleidoscope of movement As bombastic beats sway thoughts from intitial good intentions; From the DJ booth, Cupid watches-- His arrows more content to miss their mark For he knows lust dances luringly under the stars And for these oppressed and searching souls, The lights and sound are truly hypnotic; He himself has fallen under the spell of ectasy, once or twice... Staring at the lights..those beautiful, sweet lights... Dropping bow and arrows, Cupid once again dances into the night. Marcel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is something about dancing, yes loved the ending to this |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I can picture this. You've captured the essence of the dance floor and the heat generated there. Well written.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The dance floor, as humanities kitchen... creative, expressive...bubbling with chemistry Under hypnotic lights...a recipe for intense Liked this...very much TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Been a while, Marcel, but I remember those disco days, love sways, etc. Much enjoyed the write and the very personal touch you added about the DJ.......jo |
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