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A Moment of Somewhere in Time
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A Moment of Somewhere in Time |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A Moment of Somewhere in Time Clever, this instantaneous sentient which knows, in avoiding those that are mundane, shunning customary ticks that walk our day into night to know when to clutch this moment of somewhere in time, that sense of awe by which to surprise, blazing sparks that flare and flicker, sparkle and twinkle, burst into explode… did it not catch you? Oh, seize the day, they say, carpe diem all the way and yet, and yet, how long shall this blessed moment last, less than soul’s intake of breath, earlier than a wink, breathless as an age held in dust… as that schism of nerve tells the hairs on one’s arm tingle now! To study the width and breadth of this, my moment under your touch is to know a moment of somewhere in time.  ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 1 August 2002 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
(YES!YES!YES!) OH, sorry about that, but wow...did I say "WOW"? Fantastic...oh, to still that moment for a lifetime  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The precious moment lasted long enough to be shared in such amazing way ... I have been pondering over exactly this today and your words confer clarity to my thoughts. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ, you floored me when I saw the date of the first edition, so to speak....Amazing, isn't it? And I felt your own feelings as well...such depth to them... Love the poem, loved and still love the movie....and I would cry through it again....and again... (stock in Kleenex?) Perhaps... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh Karile, you don't know...I was listening to "Somewhere in Time' by Racmaninoff(sp) when I caught you on line this morning (my last night). A beautiful write indeed. I'm keeping it. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I love this Karilea! Keeper!!!! hugs, Chrislane "At one glance |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"how long shall this blessed moment last, less than soul’s intake of breath, earlier than a wink, breathless as an age held in dust… as that schism of nerve tells the hairs on one’s arm tingle now! To study the width and breadth of this, my moment under your touch is to know a moment of somewhere in time. YES!!! YES!!! Look at the hairs on my arms Karilea! Now you just had to know how much I would love this.. Oooh to be able to hold on to just one moment, somewhere in time. Love ya lady~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful, Karilea. This Somewhere in Time things has be sobbing like a baby, tonight.  .......jo |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
The magic of risking it all -- bet it all -- those were the days....  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Oh, seize the day, they say, carpe diem all the way and yet, and yet," And yet it seems something stands in the way, something that lossens our grip on the day, some oil that makes it slip away. enjoyed -------ice ><> |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Hmmmm...all the great words of praise have been used up. I guess I'll just that your breadth of wordsmithing continues to amaze me. I so enjoy your work. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely magical...I love it...**hugs** |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, this is outstanding! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I've held on to so many monets somewhere in time, thank you for reminding me of each! hugsss lady I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
that moment! Thanks for this lovely keeper, Beautiful One. hugs, miscellanea |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You poets are wonderful. Thank you for letting me count so many blessings! |
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