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Open Poetry #33

Water Is To Wall

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-08-06 12:21 PM

How well I know the fortress
By the ton, a heavy sigh

Built around me in the hush of springs
Tangled in my own heart strings
Seraph of the granite gate
To be heard articulate
The course of me your hands to cup
I seek the passage lift me up

For water wells
Insistent in the flow it dwells
In trickle of my destiny
Niagara in the least to be
Around the broken promises
Erode of blistered homage’s

This kiss awakens of the sun
In fire melts a truth so hardly won

How well I know the fortress
By the ton, a heavy sigh

Copyright Kkh 8/6/04

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-08-06 12:25 PM

As always, TD, I enjoy your work and your style.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-08-06 01:11 AM

TD -- the niagra of our emotions -- wow, good write!

...jo

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2004-08-06 01:22 AM

"How well I know the fortress
By the ton, a heavy sigh"

"sigh"  I love this line; it's so visual!

                     miscellanea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-08-06 02:20 AM

wonderful

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