Open Poetry #33 |
hey pretty |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
note: if you, the innocent reader, understand this next piece, then you should RUN, now!! Save yourself.... for you have now entered the.... snoooooooooooooooow zone heehee... yeah a little dramatic, but serious. *eg* my madness is my company..... save yourself. hey pretty milk toast whispers soggy reminders poe, she sings of my garbage disposal banquet vomit encrusted desires destinations unreachable my voice; silenced gravel pit graveyard s l i d e to the long undesired coupling and i'm so far gone there's no rescue face to the stone dancing with the wicked side i stroked one more scream up s t o p ! the wall switch is about to blow and this is the last spin before my obsession is your downfall milk toast; once tyger stripped now....5 and 1/2 seconds away from being sybil's lip balm R U N ~ ! ©snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." --Mother Teresa |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yep, that's pretty deep and maybe beyond my grasp?....very spooky this time and very creative with the imagery, though, I at least caught that. You must be in a pretty strange mood tonight. Did you just see the exorcist? lol |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm glad I'm not the only one, and just so you know, I aint running no where. I truly enjoy your vivacious nature, Snow~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love reading whatever mood you're in |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! I hope not to meet this personality in a dark alley! Scary!! Did enjoy, but now I'm looking over my shoulder. JL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You cracked me up, my pretty! Insanity becomes you! lol I think I'll try it some time! Loves 'n Laughs, EA |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Snow. I love this. Absolutely love it. Sorry I haven't e-mailed you in days. Yahoo keeps bumping my replys back to my account saying it can't find your address. It is drivng me nuts. I might have to switch to a new account. Hugs...missing you. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
and this is the last spin before my obsession is your downfall ____________________________________ some killer lines snowster ...cavernous indeed .....I like it wild style |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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