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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-08-05 07:08 AM

In the Shy of Morn's Light

There is a moment of peace that with vibration softly hums
when first the earliest light of shy green sunrise quietly comes

Nanosecond split of light breaking away from night
A moments shy of day reveals emerald eyes have come to play

Not many see this emerald revealed in sunrise's prism first unveiled
except those who arise, one with thee, come stand in early, to watch with me

Then through the passage of the day as Sun attends its charted way
There is a moment of peace around that with vibration softly sounds

When too soon the sunset shimmers last and purple layers come to cast
Soft twilight filtering over all and takes with it into the past

Then sets this day in all its bright, soft now into this purple twilight
And in this peace that comes to me, cherish always how it should be

For as day has passed to night, eyes of emerald hold shyest light
And shadows do not stand apart, but meld as one to hold these hearts.

~*~

Repost, revised

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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1 posted 2004-08-05 07:22 AM

I'm grinning ear to ear, marveling at the corn of your music
Yes, my friend, emerald green experience indeed...oh the imposing certitude of mornings shuffle into our lives...it is we that are the visitors, the guests

Thank you for a lovely morning read

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-08-05 07:34 AM

Sunshine
I'll see the morning with you anytime.

Paul Wilson

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3 posted 2004-08-05 07:54 AM

Sunshine...This may be a repost , but like each Sunrise & Sunset it is beautiful and different than the one before. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

miscellanea
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OH

4 posted 2004-08-05 08:21 AM

When too soon the sunset shimmers last and purple layers come to cast
Soft twilight filtering over all and takes with it into the past

These lines are absolutely beautiful, Sunshine.  The colors this poem brought!
  Oh, by the way, I still waiting for the humorous writing you promised me down in Prose.  You have me on the edge of my seat in curiosity!  Do write another one!
                 ~missy, misc'e, Ms.E, MisC etc.
        (I believe you spell it missy.)  I enjoy viewing everyone's preference of the spelling.  They all feel good to me!)

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2004-08-05 12:54 PM

and you know I love that last line

Ericc
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6 posted 2004-08-05 02:01 PM

Beauty revisited.

Eric

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-08-05 02:23 PM

Very very beautiful...just like the sweet poet who wrote it!
Hugs...and I'll be back soon.

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

Susan
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walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-08-05 03:09 PM

Beautiful, I can see it . . .

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

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9 posted 2004-08-05 03:13 PM

Karilea

Oh, how I know this morning...I had lost it for a bit...thank you for reminding me that it was there all along!

Endlessecho
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I live within myself

10 posted 2004-08-05 03:16 PM

This is so beautiful.. what a melody! and what a picture!

Corinne
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state of confusion

11 posted 2004-08-05 05:15 PM

Sunshine, this is...sunshine!

Have missed 'ya, gal!

Corinne

Magnus

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12 posted 2004-08-05 09:08 PM

The really great thing about this poem Sun,
in how you can feel it so easily...and see
it so clearly as it unfolds...

muted

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

13 posted 2004-08-05 09:13 PM

this had such a gentle flow and beautiful images...melts right into the "soft spot"

Local Rebel
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14 posted 2004-08-05 11:10 PM

*wry grin...

an ironic end to my day...

wake well Karilea!

Kaoru

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where the wild flowers grow

15 posted 2004-08-06 12:28 PM

I love it.

iliana
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16 posted 2004-08-06 01:39 AM

SIL, I am so glad you reposted this truly inspiring poem. It makes me wish I were a painter so I could capture the magic of the moments you have so beautifully laid before us.

.......jo

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