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Poetess of the Blue
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Poetess of the Blue |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Where have you gone, poetess of the blue? Do not you hear my pleas for your reprise? I yearn your words, with thoughts so pure, so true, Your tender odes, fall forth from midnight skies To touch upon, nay, kiss on mortal man With haunting voice of golden nightingale. Lo’ would I hear your madrigals again, Which pierce my soul, into heart’s depths impale. I dream at night, fearing of tomorrow, My only light, lament of your refrain, Though oft you quill, heartaches’ bite and sorrow, Within your ache, lies beauty bathed in pain, I seek the night, with beauty that you bring, Ensconced within, odes soft as angel’s wing. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Tim, this was really beautiful, and I hope the poetess returns.  ....jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I hope she hears you. This is lovely in its longing. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
;Enjoyed...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love to read your poems, your Shakespearean style inspires me... ~ARH  "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me wonder who |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so beautiful, I hope she returns swiftly to these pages of blue.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, a twilight song... thank you, Sir... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
thank you for all the kind comments... the poetess of the blue is an amalgamation of all the poetesses of Passions, so she returns on a daily basis. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sweet, Tim, Sweet! miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now, this made me feel so special, Tim. Thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tim, this is some very fine poetry. One of your best. Such a gift you have given to them. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Absolutely beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is really awesome Tim. Makes me feel special as I know it will all of the lady poets here. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
We ARE all special...right, Tim? This is a beautiful poem! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
And I melt like butter on toast for you to eat........ (I don't meen it in any bad ways. Just say'n That was a good poem. ) ahhhh........... Juju |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
AH...when needed most, you always find your way back to blue and my muse sings for you We've requests fo a duet...if you're up to the challange dear Sir, e-mail me reply forthcoming |
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