Open Poetry #33 |
![]() ![]() |
When Forever Fades |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan ![]() |
You came to me in the Autumn, with promises of never to leave, today I found tears in my eyes. The promises you made are now gone for you’re not here. I only hope you’ll be happy wherever the roads lead, as you go a part of me leaves with you. Without a word you walked away leaving me with only the memories we shared, the love I gave you. |
||
© Copyright 2004 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved | |||
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
'I only hope you’ll be happy wherever the roads lead, as you go a part of me leaves with you' -- you speak with the universal voice here -- |
||
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you Local Rebel for the comment. your comment means a lot to me. Its nice to know I still got it somewhere. :-) |
||
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
froggy, This poem really makes me feel... to remember... Take care, Kiddo. You're pretty ok. I feel badly this happened, but we never know what the future will be. (I've had doors shut that re-opened at a better time. Perhaps?) You expressed yourself very well, froggy. miscellanea |
||
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
![]() ![]() |
||
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
It hurts..I know....when we are taught to believe in fairytales... fairytales are for fairies... I am starting to believe happily ever after does not exist...at least here! Great poem! Love and Hugs ~ARH ![]() "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
||
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you Miscellanea for the wonderful comment. It means alot. Thank-you iliana for your comment, yes I'm okay.Just having an off day is all. Thank-you Romantic Heart for your wonderful comment as well. :-) |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand...well |
||
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you PassingShadows For the comment. :-) |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |