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Tears of you
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Tears of you |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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The fear of letting go is ever so cold in my veins. My love has gone and so has my soul, my very being is decease. Left dead out like a common cheap medicade funeral which no one cares about. My heart is torn broken battered tears stream down my pale face I think to myself why did I do this for why did I let this happen,I will never be the same again,Life is hard and every last thing I learnt about love was a lie For my eyes are so clear my headaches my body shakes in convulsions of the next years of regret forced into another beating. I'm on fire working again to get away run away just for one more day pour the booze down the drain that stuff will just make me more insane. Hop a plane to advoid reality take me to passion and divine place where everything is rosed colored just for a little while I beg. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh my, this aches terribly. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Sad but beautifully written |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, a very sad, but so real write. Many have been down this same path and sadly, many more shall follow. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
yea down with love Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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