Open Poetry #33 |
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F.F. split/divides P.S. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
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F.F. split/divides P.S. She/they/them skipper sounds like well worn capes, voices clamor echoes appeal inside of want to cry, “come give me…” tapped and taping random thoughts, she drums her toe, sips her joe irate, her eyes from seeking ground where lovers once laid like clowns around, as echoes come, “where are you…” and there was never calm of life, ever wired, useless wife, talent exploited, what talent there was only the crazies know what caused though P.S. always felt sinside that F.F. knew she would abide come voices clamor echoes appeal together they cry, “come give me…” real. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
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Powerful write, Decaflame! Enjoyed this a bunch. miscellanea |
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Ratleader![]()
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Wow! Just Wow! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca....I think I'd like to echo Ed's "wow". WOW! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
69 or 70 cards shuffle and deal playing for caddy's and waterfalls such images in here ms enjoyed it thanks for the wave |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sometimes the caddy gets the tips, but the waterfalls always steal the show... thanks, DS... Dixie, yea, me too... ![]() Rat, thanks for not saying MoM! Martie, always a hug for you... ![]() ![]() Misc'e...it's just real. ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
another wow! really good |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The tale between the lines Shows the woe inside. Sometimes our stressed minds Simply can't abide. Nicely done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very nicely done! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Decaflame, Just had to come back to this! It says so much, breathing emotion and reality in bits and pieces, the way it always seems to fall! Now that I've had a taste of your work, you can bank on it that I'll be back. miscellanea |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
tapped and taping random thoughts, she drums her toe, sips her joe irate, her eyes from seeking ground where lovers once laid like clowns around, as echoes come, “where are you…” and there was never calm of life, ever wired, useless wife, talent exploited, what talent there was only the crazies know what caused though P.S. always felt sinside that F.F. knew she would abide come voices clamor echoes appeal together they cry, “come give me…” real. YES! OH YES!!!!!! You have no idea how this hits home...... ![]() |
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