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Kristabell
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0 posted 2004-08-31 12:58 PM




Everyone searches,
Everyone eventually finds,
What they are looking for,
They find sollace within their minds.
Everyone struggles,
Everyone succeeds,
Everyone eventually discovers,
What there mind truly needs.
Everyone fights,
Everyone eventually wins,
Everybody knows,
What is truly wanted within.
Everybody gets confused,
Everybody eventually understands,
That life is a balance,
In its center, everybody lands.



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Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
1 posted 2004-08-31 01:41 AM


I want ot change the last line. I figured it out after I sent the poast. The last line should be,

In its center, everybody eventually lands.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-08-31 01:53 AM


this makes me feel good, and not so alone
Kristabell
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3 posted 2004-08-31 01:13 PM


Thank you.
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