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My Ode to The poets
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My Ode to The poets |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
The poet is the fickle heart its back and front collide all his heart and soul arrive when their minds deride For all their words they are blind The poets soul creates a world where it may never live for all it wants is other ones to exist in yesterday Each poet is alone and done As it sits under midday sun and dreams of the new day ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Poe-- I think that the first stanza is the most true for me...great job! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Second stanza is the one most likened to me  Well done ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
The entire piece sings a melodious tune for me Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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