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The Love of your Life
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The Love of your Life |
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Jaguar Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51Quezon City, Philippines |
I came with you that night when the moon and stars was at sight you sang to me songs of love as you serenaded me like a love You danced with me in the sand while I took hold your hand you whispered in my ear words that I fancied to hear You lifted me in the air and the wind brushed my hair we gazed into the moon hoping this won't end soon You touched my face and my heart started to race you kissed my cheek and I felt meek You told me I'm the love of your life and you asked me to be your wife but all I could do is to dream of being with you My lips had failed to say words that paved your way yet the tears in my eyes, had covered all my lies You are the one I sought for hoping it will last forever more your love had given me wings to fly and you made my spirit soar up high. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
You'll find him Jag, he's out there. Relax, he's still looking too. Somtimes we look too hard. -RS ------------------ There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Welcome to Passions Jag. I could picture your poem on a beach, at the edge of the wave line where the tide was rolling in. Good imagery! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to Dark Passions Jag!! I really enjoyed the imagery in this one. It'll happen again Jag, and even better this time  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Jag; Welcome to Passions...Very beautiful poem and great imagery....(I can feel the water and sand rushing up to tickle my feet at the shoreline).... Your spirit will soar once more when the right one comes knocking again at your door. Looking forward to seeing more from you. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A slow dance with memory I found with this piece. Very well done, Jaguar. michael |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Now it is my turn to tell you that you have brought back a memory for me. . . the beach at sunset. . . at sunrise. . . the face of my lover, the joy in her eyes. . . You will run again my friend. . . through the fields of love, for a heart such as yours is usually only found in those that come from above. Sven ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jaguar Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51Quezon City, Philippines |
Dear Everyone, I couldn't thank you enough for all the good things that you have said about my poem. I'm positively touched!, Thanks a lot Everyone!!!. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Michael said it best !!! Jenny Lee |
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