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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I'm lying in bed flooded with thoughts spinning in my head I just want to sleep How long will this last? Starting to weep haunted by the past What can I do? There's nowhere to hide So I lay here and wait fo the storm to subside |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Waiting will not work facing a fear i think is brave cool poem a little on the short side ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I've been lying in that same bed for a long time...Could truly feel the emptiness of this one. Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I must echo michael on this one...i can sense the loneliness and the longing for someone that is not there...sad...but good ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Walter Poe - Thnk you. You are right facing your fears brave indeed. But this was more about to many painful questions that have't and may never be answered. Micheal and starboards- Thank you also. It is a lonely state to be in. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You may be lying in bed haunted about the past... but the lines are filled with great hope  I enjoyed this Danni very much...I too have selpt in that bed! jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 12-01-1999).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Thank you JennyLee. I do suppose we have all been there at one time or another. I do have hope that it all will one day come to settle. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You must arise my friend. . . Arise and greet the new dawn. . . For in that new day, your love is there Wonderful. . . ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Can I ever relate to this! I always say, sometimes my mind is my own worst enemy. easier said but ya need to just try to take yourself to a peaceful place when this happens. To be honest though, it doesn't always work. I really love your work danni. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Thank you Sven. I hope you are right but until the dawn of that new day when love is found I will remain a patron of the night. Lostboy, my heart is my worst enemy. It is what brought me to this world of hurt and disappointment. Thank you for the wonderful compliment and words of wisdom. I have also tried that method. Often to no avail. |
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