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Anger |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Anger Rushing in Pulsing in my head Anger like a wild river Un-controlable Crashing waves hit rocks Like my anger hits my victims With a menacing shout My short harsh words will drive you out My anger Can't be controlled today It just can't be controlled ------------------ JOY -Don't go around saying the world owes you a living; the world owes you nothing; it was here first. -Mark Twain |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
That's a cool description of anger, waves crashing on the rocks. Man, there's no controlling that!! Nicely worded Joy. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
As one who has bounced down a river w/o the benefit of a boat, I must say anger likened to that is frightening indeed. DB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well described indeed!! Sometimes you've just gotta be angry and nothing will coax you out of it!!  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I agree with the others, well done indeed. Boy do I know those days as well! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Anger and Rage can't be quite a rush, indeed. You grasp this well. michael |
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