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lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-11-29 11:42 AM

Lover to leaver
Like dust to dust
I'm thinking I need ya
But do as you must
Trusted 'till busted
Much to my surprise
Run away lover
Run from your lies

My time is no time
My curtain is drawn
I'm shy to the light
A page has been torn
Tossed it and lost it
Yeah, right, you cared
Run away lover
Your just running scared

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 1999-11-29 11:56 AM

Aah lostboy, you've delivered as usual.
Wonderful poem.
I wonder what it could be that scares the lover so. I was never scared to love, of course until i was cursed by that "runaway lover" your poem speaks of.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 1999-11-29 01:54 PM

Very good lostboy. . .

But I wonder, who really ran away?

Sven

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 1999-11-29 02:37 PM

Thanks danni, you're the best. I've never been scared to love either but, when you're first going into it, aren't we usually on a higher plain thinking, maybe this will be it this time?
Thanks sven, good point, who was it!?

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

4 posted 1999-11-29 03:40 PM

Short and sweet. Perfect for my attention span or lack thereof. Enjoyed.

DB

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-11-29 05:57 PM

It's the ones that are scared to love who end up alone, well done this one

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

6 posted 1999-11-30 01:25 AM

You're right lostboy. I do go into new relationships thinking "this could be the one". And so far they all have had the same ending. Anyways-good point.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-11-30 01:25 PM

I love this!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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