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Death of Two Souls |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Words quietly spoken beneath his breath Heard as a whisper to her ears Taking his hand, wraping in hers They walked the gnarled dark woods The night is upon them No longer can they see What is ahead The darkness encircles every corner of every tree. Her arm starts to shake He calms her with his whispers Now lower than before. The sound of distant footsteps Echo in their ears Then as soon as they came They seemed to disapeer. Walking Not seeing Where would this un taken path lead? They stopped then, listening again for the evil, and realized it was time, time for them to feed. He grabbed hold of her arm And shunned away the evil that came to do harm She whimpered and cried Softly with as much effort as she had And he whispered words of comfort Louder now, like a prayer. The light would never come now They both knew they went to far Into the woods, the evil woods Where they planned to give their lives But also wanted to keep their love forever Without the sacrifice To die. Together they held eachother Lost in their own world and un reachable depths Waiting until the spirit keeper Came to collect their souls Came to collect, and inflict upon them, death |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
What can I say but WOW! I Liked this. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I'm in shock, I swear, I had a dream very similar to this last year. WOW....Like it very much. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very nice... Love the imagery used in this one. I was walking through those woods in my mind as I read this  ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 11-28-1999).] |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
JOY, This one is very powerful. Walked the gnarled dark woods with you. -RS ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too, enjoyed my journey through the woods, thankyou!! This one is superb ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thank you all. I liked this one very much myself! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, very intricate piece here...very revealing. To find forever in love would be worth dying for to many, I believe. Beautifully done, Joy. Michael |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
He calms her with his whispers !! Glorious! Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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