Dark Poetry #1 |
Dungeon Master |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Try as I might, The feelings of doubt resurface, They enfold me yet again, Will my heart never know true peace? Mystical chakra gripped in hand, Can only save me from others, Nothing can save me from myself, Why do I even bother? Rich, sullen and slow, Like a fat monster, Come to sit by me, There's not much more that can be done. From what graveyard, Did the darkness crawl? What primeval ooze? Makes no sense at all. Is my life just a parade or rehearsal, In some bigger beings childish fun? He forever keeps me dangling, Often crushing everyone. Sadness and fear outside, Screams and darkness inside, The dungeon master with eyes so dark, Still has hold of me..... ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
ooooh, powerful...excellent work! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Alwye ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The last lines....I love.... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hard to escape those eyes, Isis. I know. michael |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Excellent Isis loved all your great lines Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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