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Trusting people with your Life
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Trusting people with your Life |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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Pain fills my soul I let you hurt me You return for another blow You say I mean nothing I am simply a mistake I was what mad your life suck I try hard not to listen I wonder why I let you hurt me so Why do I trust you I trust you no more I try to forget But you come back at me again All I ask is why -To my mother- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions Neala!!  So sorry someone as important in your life as Mom let you down  Nicely written.------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Well done. This brings flashbacks of the way my ex-boyfriend treated me. Sorry it was your mom that made you feel this way. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ouch, maybe our mothers are related somehow. Great piece, the pain is vivid. Welcome to Dark Passions, indeed. Michael |
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Stevia Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28 |
Its good to let your anger out.Sad that this is dedicated to your mother.Cheer up there are better people out there. |
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