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pixon
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10
oh.

0 posted 1999-11-26 11:57 PM


As I awaken
My dreams have been taken
The world has stared its beatings
I hate how I am being treated
But I survive
Barley staying alive
As the day wears on
My mind is gone
Numbed from the world
Life is nothing to behold
As the day goes dark
The world has left its mark
Now , finally back in bed
Nothing now is said
NOw in my perfect dreams
With its multi colores beams
Finally I am happy
In a zap
Im awake
The world had my dreams taken
It repeats
What a treat

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dead I am the rat. feast upon the cat, tender as the fur, dieing as you pur. -ROB ZOMBIE-

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-27 05:09 PM


When you dream...... Your dreams sound more interesting than mine Well done this one.




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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-11-28 01:27 AM


I agree, well done! I wish I had more dreams to escape to. My dreams are usually few and far between, and tend to be bad
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-29 04:07 AM


Repetative dreams....yeah, i go through those too. Good poem.


michael

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