Dark Poetry #1 |
Dream |
pixon Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10oh. |
As I awaken My dreams have been taken The world has stared its beatings I hate how I am being treated But I survive Barley staying alive As the day wears on My mind is gone Numbed from the world Life is nothing to behold As the day goes dark The world has left its mark Now , finally back in bed Nothing now is said NOw in my perfect dreams With its multi colores beams Finally I am happy In a zap Im awake The world had my dreams taken It repeats What a treat ------------------ dead I am the rat. feast upon the cat, tender as the fur, dieing as you pur. -ROB ZOMBIE- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
When you dream...... Your dreams sound more interesting than mine Well done this one. ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I agree, well done! I wish I had more dreams to escape to. My dreams are usually few and far between, and tend to be bad |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Repetative dreams....yeah, i go through those too. Good poem. michael |
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