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Dark Poetry #1

Lost in Love

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-11-27 09:39 AM

Eyes that tell a story
Eyes that show the sign
Can't read what they're saying
Can't tell if it's time
Hearts a hidden message
In a bottle out at sea
Could it ever wash up
To be found by me

Still small voice inside me
Says this is it this time
Now I read the story
But I read between the lines
Angel's mercy mission
Cure a hedonist
Sunset of sensualism
Color me illusionist

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-27 05:00 PM

So many twists and turns I like!!

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-11-28 01:40 AM

I must say I loved this one. I am feeling this way right now just when I was ready to give up. Still not sure about trustin the little voice. Been led astray to many times.
Anyway, well done!

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 1999-11-28 09:23 AM

I hear ya danni, same here. Can't give up though, OK?
Thank you Isis, I appreciate it!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-29 04:09 AM

I think we're all illusionist to some extent, lostboy. Great piece.

michael

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 1999-11-30 12:48 PM

Sunset of sensualism

I really enjoyed this Lost Boy

Jenny

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-30-1999).]

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